CELPIP Writing Task 1 · Writing an Email · question 12 of 15
Organizing a Block Party
A CELPIP Writing Task 1 practice question (Writing an Email), with a model answer below. No sign-up needed. Read the task, then write 150–200 words in 27 minutes, as you would on the test.
The task
You and some other residents are organizing a party for everyone who lives on your street. A family moved into a house near yours recently, and you have not met them yet. Write an email to your new neighbours in about 150-200 words. In your email, do the following:
- Give details about the event.
- Explain why you would like them to come.
- Ask them to help with something for the party.
- Length
- 150–200 words
- Time
- 27 minutes
- Question
- 12 of 15
A simple way to build your answer
- Introduce yourself first, since you have not met your new neighbours yet.
- Give the key details: date, time, place and what will happen.
- Make your request for help polite and easy to say no to.
Model answer · CLB 9
187 words · no sign-upDear Mr. and Mrs. Santos, I hope you are settling in well after your move. I'm Chloe from number 17, and I wanted to let you know that a few of us are organizing a block party for the whole street. It will be on Saturday, June 14, from 3:00 to 8:00 p.m., and the city has given us permission to close off the section of Birch Lane between our houses and the park. I would really love for you both to come. Since you're new to the neighbourhood, it would be a relaxed way to meet everyone without having to knock on twenty doors! There will be a barbecue, games for the children and some live music from a neighbour's band. I also wanted to ask a small favour. We are a little short of tables and chairs, so if you happen to have any folding ones, would you mind lending them for the afternoon? If not, perhaps you could bring a salad or dessert to share instead. Please let me know if you can make it. I hope to see you there! Best wishes, Chloe
Why this answer works
- The writer introduces herself before inviting, and then gives every event detail (date, time and the closed section of Birch Lane) in one well-organised paragraph.
- The semi-formal register fits new neighbours: friendly and welcoming, with titles in the greeting and a light touch of humour about knocking on twenty doors.
- The favour is requested politely with "would you mind" and softened with an alternative, showing good control of polite request forms.
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