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CELPIP Writing Task 1 · Writing an Email · question 7 of 15

Furniture Delivery Never Arrived

A CELPIP Writing Task 1 practice question (Writing an Email), with a model answer below. No sign-up needed. Read the task, then write 150–200 words in 27 minutes, as you would on the test.

The task

You bought a new sofa from a furniture store and paid for home delivery on a specific day. You stayed home to wait for it, but the delivery never came and no one contacted you. Write an email to the store's customer service manager in about 150-200 words. In your email, do the following:

Length
150–200 words
Time
27 minutes
Question
7 of 15

A simple way to build your answer

  1. Put the order details (date, item, order number, delivery window) in the first paragraph.
  2. Describe the real effects on you, such as lost time or money, to show why the problem matters.
  3. Ask for a clear solution and give your contact information.

Model answer · CLB 9

186 words · no sign-up

Dear Customer Service Manager, I am writing to complain about a delivery that did not take place. On September 20, I ordered a three-seat grey sofa from your Laval store, order number 58731, and paid $1,480 in full, including a $90 delivery fee. Your staff confirmed that it would be delivered on Saturday, October 4, between 9:00 a.m. and 1:00 p.m. On that day, I stayed at home for the entire morning and well into the afternoon, but no one arrived. Nobody called to explain the delay either, and when I phoned the store at 2:00 p.m., I was put on hold for forty minutes before the line disconnected. To be available, I had missed my son's hockey game, and I had already given away my old sofa, so my family now has nowhere comfortable to sit. I would like the sofa to be delivered within the next week, on a date that we confirm in advance. I would also ask for the $90 delivery fee to be refunded because of the inconvenience. Please reply to this email or call me at 514-555-0182. Sincerely, Julien Tremblay

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